I finished the game! Everything seemed to be working properly now and I managed to get passed the bus stop. This wasn't a bad debut! I think you did fine with the game mechanics. I made a Let's Play video showcasing my experience and I took some time in the outro to review the game a bit more. Underneath the video I'll also give some of my feedback in text.
The story is an important factor for me in a horror game and there wasn't much of a story in this game to be honest. Of course there is a protagonist that goes through a nightmarish loop and you can progress the game by flipping switches in the underground maze, but beside that not much is going on. I hope you can focus more on story in the future when you get the hang of making games!
I also thought the traps in the underground maze were distracting. The monsters were supposed to be scary but I wasn't really paying attention to being scared because I was so focused on finding my way through the traps and getting away from the monsters that I didn't have space in my mind to even be scared anymore.
This is a loop game so I understand there being a repetative factor in this game, but the second loop made me do exactly the same as the first and that felt a bit lazy to me. I would've prefered to see some real changes in the second part of the game or at least to see something new.
But the overal experience was okay! Keep on going and good luck! Hope to see more of your games in the future.
I really appreciate you taking the time to play my first game and share your feedback!I really appreciate your thoughts and your comments are very valuable to me, it will help me improve many things when making the next games. I’m truly grateful for the time and support you've given this game.
In the future, if you come across any other games I create, I’d love for you to try them out and share your feedback. Every piece of advice helps me grow as a developer.
Once again, thank you for your support and for giving this game a chance!
Thank you for trying out my game and for your feedback! I’m sorry you couldn’t progress past the bus stop.To get past this part, you’ll need to activate two triggers in the game. Since this is my first project, I created it mostly by instinct, so there may be some rough edges. it’s pretty simple and doesn’t include any puzzles or complex mechanics. I really appreciate your patience and for helping me improve with your feedback!
And let me ask, how can you see my game.Because my game is in review queue for about 2 weeks and no one can find my game by search.
Thanks for the reply! What triggers do I need to activate? I saw the monster the far right of the street but I walked everywhere and I can't seem to find more triggers?
Your game has been in my library for about two weeks, I think. I found it in the list of new horror games and saved it to my wishlist.
I made a new update for this game to fix some things,you should download the new version.1 remaining trigger is on the paper on the street light.hope you enjoy the game
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I finished the game! Everything seemed to be working properly now and I managed to get passed the bus stop. This wasn't a bad debut! I think you did fine with the game mechanics. I made a Let's Play video showcasing my experience and I took some time in the outro to review the game a bit more. Underneath the video I'll also give some of my feedback in text.
The story is an important factor for me in a horror game and there wasn't much of a story in this game to be honest. Of course there is a protagonist that goes through a nightmarish loop and you can progress the game by flipping switches in the underground maze, but beside that not much is going on. I hope you can focus more on story in the future when you get the hang of making games!I also thought the traps in the underground maze were distracting. The monsters were supposed to be scary but I wasn't really paying attention to being scared because I was so focused on finding my way through the traps and getting away from the monsters that I didn't have space in my mind to even be scared anymore.
This is a loop game so I understand there being a repetative factor in this game, but the second loop made me do exactly the same as the first and that felt a bit lazy to me. I would've prefered to see some real changes in the second part of the game or at least to see something new.
But the overal experience was okay! Keep on going and good luck! Hope to see more of your games in the future.
I really appreciate you taking the time to play my first game and share your feedback!I really appreciate your thoughts and your comments are very valuable to me, it will help me improve many things when making the next games.
I’m truly grateful for the time and support you've given this game.
In the future, if you come across any other games I create, I’d love for you to try them out and share your feedback. Every piece of advice helps me grow as a developer.
Once again, thank you for your support and for giving this game a chance!
No problem! Glad you find it helpful. I will try any other horror game you make 😊 Good luck!
Hey. I've played your game but I couldn't get passed the bus stop. I'm pressing [E] all I can but nothing happens. A bug? Fixing it would be nice!
Thank you for trying out my game and for your feedback! I’m sorry you couldn’t progress past the bus stop.To get past this part, you’ll need to activate two triggers in the game. Since this is my first project, I created it mostly by instinct, so there may be some rough edges. it’s pretty simple and doesn’t include any puzzles or complex mechanics. I really appreciate your patience and for helping me improve with your feedback!
And let me ask, how can you see my game.Because my game is in review queue for about 2 weeks and no one can find my game by search.
Thanks for the reply! What triggers do I need to activate? I saw the monster the far right of the street but I walked everywhere and I can't seem to find more triggers?
Your game has been in my library for about two weeks, I think. I found it in the list of new horror games and saved it to my wishlist.
I made a new update for this game to fix some things,you should download the new version.1 remaining trigger is on the paper on the street light.hope you enjoy the game
Thank you! I will! And I'll let you know how it went :)
Hi im wandering how long would be the exspected time of completion from this game from start to finish
I did it in about 50 days
in meant in 1 sitting
if you mean playing time then around 20-30 minutes.This is the first game i made so it is very short